Character writing        

My name is Kodie Green I was living my normal life I worked at Mcdonalds I earned $1 an hour it took me a week to find food because I had trouble finding the supermarket I have a r32 nissan skyline for a car and every corner I drift around and nearly crash i am thirsty so I buy a bottle of water but something  weird started to happen.

I think I am invincible I say to myself so I ask someone to throw a brick at me so they did and I didn't feel it so I start to panic I read what’s on the bottle of water then I see super water and i’m like what!!!!

I went back to live my normal life but I used my power for the best of the town I saved people like Donald Trump but he died the next day that’s a good thing I guess I also saved Tk my mate he jumped off a cliff I had to jump down and and grab him but my power had worn off and I died!!!!        

Who is he !!!!!!!!!!!

The Maori Warrior

10.08.2017

LG: to show not tell

The maori warrior had a blank face staring me down with his raised eyebrows. His eyes were as wide as someone yawning, at this time the maori warrior and I were in the bush stearing each other down. I was wondering what was on his neck because he smelt like dead animals. Then, I realized he had deer fur on his neck I said hi but nothing came out of his mouth. I heard loud maori words and he slapped his thigh. I tried to walk past but he stabbed his spair into the ground, then I got a soft tingle in my hand and a yummy taste in my mouth, it then faded away as fast as I could run out of the bush.

Written by Kodie Green

who is he .................?

Who is He?

He has a giant forehead with a square head. His giant googly eyes and spiky hair makes him look like an owl. He wears an orangey red colored t-shirt and his blue shorts cover his rudies. He always rides a dark green skate board with black wheels. He is a cheeky boy and always has to write lines on the black board at school. His skin is bright yellow.  

bruce lee

    He is young his name is bruce he works for UFC he is strong ,fast ,tall ,skinny ,and a champion he has black hair and brown eyes he got knocked out when he was three and broke his arm when he was five.