The Maori Warrior
10.08.2017
LG: to show not tell
The maori warrior had a blank face staring me down with his raised eyebrows. His eyes were as wide as someone yawning, at this time the maori warrior and I were in the bush stearing each other down. I was wondering what was on his neck because he smelt like dead animals. Then, I realized he had deer fur on his neck I said hi but nothing came out of his mouth. I heard loud maori words and he slapped his thigh. I tried to walk past but he stabbed his spair into the ground, then I got a soft tingle in my hand and a yummy taste in my mouth, it then faded away as fast as I could run out of the bush.
Written by Kodie Green
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