Who is he !!!!!!!!!!!

The Maori Warrior

10.08.2017

LG: to show not tell

The maori warrior had a blank face staring me down with his raised eyebrows. His eyes were as wide as someone yawning, at this time the maori warrior and I were in the bush stearing each other down. I was wondering what was on his neck because he smelt like dead animals. Then, I realized he had deer fur on his neck I said hi but nothing came out of his mouth. I heard loud maori words and he slapped his thigh. I tried to walk past but he stabbed his spair into the ground, then I got a soft tingle in my hand and a yummy taste in my mouth, it then faded away as fast as I could run out of the bush.

Written by Kodie Green

who is he .................?

Who is He?

He has a giant forehead with a square head. His giant googly eyes and spiky hair makes him look like an owl. He wears an orangey red colored t-shirt and his blue shorts cover his rudies. He always rides a dark green skate board with black wheels. He is a cheeky boy and always has to write lines on the black board at school. His skin is bright yellow.